April 22nd, 2009
Picking Up Beer: Revisited
Anniversary week continues!
This is a revision of “Picking Up Beer” from April 23rd, 2008.
Looking at the original comic, it looks like I’m ripping my own head off of my body. And those bags of chips are enormous! On the other hand, I really like the text effect that I used in the second panel.
April 22nd, 2009 at 12:17 am
Your art has definitely come a long way! I enjoy these revisited comics you’re doing. I’m more partial to the original second-panel copy, though — I like the bit about Guinness and beer-snobbery.
Also? Check the copy in the word balloon in the final panel on the revisit.
April 22nd, 2009 at 12:19 am
Hey, I have an account on Gravatar! Why isn’t my avatar showing up? Something to look into…
April 22nd, 2009 at 7:43 am
Thanks!
It took me far too long to find the typo in the last panel, but it’s fixed now (and I’ve un-awkwarded the wording a bit).
As for Gravatar, I disabled it because I didn’t like the way the placeholder image looked when people didn’t have accounts ;-)